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Monday, November 26, 2007
duh sonnet-sonnetan
“Perfect Woman” Everyone wants to attain perfection Or at least come close to the public’s norm But I would never be a collection Of excellence in any kind or form I am not grand nor sophisticated As every lady is described to be I can be easily irritated All my comrades will attest and agree But as I weigh what I have and I lack My ample blessing of friends, joy and skills Would be able to conquer and attack All my anxieties, flaws, fears and ills Because of all these things I know I can Now I shall be my own perfect woman ~~~~~~~~~ I KNOW IT'S LAME i spent 1 and a half hours doing that thing.... at first i thought it was easier that i thought so...... but then ely's stat msg made me remember that it should be in an Iambic pentameter pattern, way or whatever.... bah... the first and 2nd quatrains had no prob.... but i went crazy in making the 3rd quat work...... eps tlga.... sabi ni cute ung 1st quat is nick joaquin-ish............. whatever is nick joaquin-ish..................... read Xtian's and ely's and whoever posts theirs you'll obviously like them.... my title makes me remember the song.....uh.... ewan...ung..."I'm not a perfect person............" whatever i don't make any sense again it's so noisy over hear maynilad drilling had been driving me crazy..... the load TV(you SHOULD turn it louder to understand what it says)..... my shouting father on the phone...... ba.........h........... I am hungry..... i will be doing math HW after dinner...... hope you'll do yours.... or maybe im the only who haven't done it bah babu..... -kjc07-ate at
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