Monday, November 26, 2007

duh sonnet-sonnetan

“Perfect Woman”

Everyone wants to attain perfection

Or at least come close to the public’s norm

But I would never be a collection

Of excellence in any kind or form

I am not grand nor sophisticated

As every lady is described to be

I can be easily irritated

All my comrades will attest and agree

But as I weigh what I have and I lack

My ample blessing of friends, joy and skills

Would be able to conquer and attack

All my anxieties, flaws, fears and ills

Because of all these things I know I can

Now I shall be my own perfect woman


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I KNOW IT'S LAME

i spent 1 and a half hours doing that thing.... at first i thought it was easier that i thought so...... but then ely's stat msg made me remember that it should be in an Iambic pentameter pattern, way or whatever....

bah... the first and 2nd quatrains had no prob.... but i went crazy in making the 3rd quat work...... eps tlga....

sabi ni cute ung 1st quat is nick joaquin-ish............. whatever is nick joaquin-ish.....................

read Xtian's and ely's and whoever posts theirs you'll obviously like them....

my title makes me remember the song.....uh.... ewan...ung..."I'm not a perfect person............" whatever

i don't make any sense again

it's so noisy over hear

maynilad drilling had been driving me crazy..... the load TV(you SHOULD turn it louder to understand what it says)..... my shouting father on the phone...... ba.........h...........

I am hungry..... i will be doing math HW after dinner...... hope you'll do yours.... or maybe im the only who haven't done it

bah


babu.....

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